Needs more snare drum. Seriously.. make it way louder. The tom rhythm sounded awesome, but try equalizing the cymbals with the rest of the kit; the ride cymbal was like WHOAOA.
The electric guitar needs some help. To me, it didn't fit. Maybe if it had more accurate tone and articulation.
Pretty good song. You should definitely consider expanding this and adding some kind of verse-chorus deal.
i like it!
its like agressive pop music
i love the way it sharply cuts from very aggressive to very quiet.
maybe the drumkit could be a bit more in your face, but apart from that is sounds very nice
feel free to review some of my stuff, if you do i will review more of yours :)
keep it up