It felt like you mixed two different songs together into one song. I don't feel they connected with each other well. If I were to rate them both separately I would rate them both higher...but together I don't think they mix with each other well.
I like the piano in the back but it doesn't mesh well with the cool drum beat in the front of the song. Anyway, that's my 2 cents on all your work. You're pretty good and I feel like you have something unique about the way you do music...but I don't think it shined out in this last one. Anyway, dude. Have a good day!