Personally, I liked the electric guitars.
It's generally a fairly cool sounding piece. I think you could have done a better job flowing everything together, but it was alright.
There were some spots where the melody was kinda awkward. For example, 34-36, there was a note change that seemed a little abrupt. That's just me being picky though!
It's pretty good.
THe combination of organs and electric guitars suited the song very well. However, because the KBS it was sampled at, the electric guitars didn't sound all that good. Then, the organs played alone didn't sound good either. Go back to the drawing board, and try to make something that sounds interesting to you and the listener.