You were right when you said it was long!
Well, I listened to your song, among others.. and this song instantly makes me think of a city getting bombed in a movie, whether it's a nuclear bomb falling down on the city, everything is wiped out, people are stumbling around in chaos, and then the drum kicks in around 01:00, and you can see the skies clearing away people starting to figure out what's going on.
02:00 People are starting to wander out into the streets carrying belongings and the wounded, the antagonist can see bodies laid out all over the street, crumbled buildings...
03:00 (I think the conversion to the new drum beat was a little shaky...)
03:57 The hero is on a hill and at last sees the whole city, smoke blooming up into the sky, wreckage scattered everywhere, and little bumbling forms wandering aimlessly around the city.
Now, I'll end my little movie analogy now and get on with the review, overall a good song, and you did good with the ending, I think it was the best part of the whole song to me...
So, without pestering further, let me tell you that you've done a good job and I'll be browsing your music for more!
-Eastep1, Annoying Reviewing Pest - ARP
Thank you ! Excellent review. I was actually surprised to find a review for this song, because it's an old one, and it tends to be overlooked.
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