To be honest, you could've done this way better. The tact seems to be quite off and some of the sounds just don't fit togheter with each other. You claim that this song is rather old, so I'll listen to some of your songs before I say too much.
The only advice I can give you after listening to this song is, try to feel the music. Practice your tactfulness too :).
yah, i feel ya
i heard this now after a few years and id change some around.
it is just a few samples put together though. there not a lot of control over the samples, ya know?
Its not bad, its nice and Relaxing really, Good work
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.