i dont usually listen to rap...
but this, is truly different, i just had to keep lisening and hear the the story it had to tell.
thanks for giving us a chance then man :]
i like when non rap listeners check out our stuff.
it kinda means more than when someone who does like rap listens.
if you like this one maybe you should check out let it go.
its kind of similar to this.
I hate to be the asshole here...
It's awesome to see you using rap to let feelings out in a real way. The song itself is admirable on all levels. That being said, the biggest problem of the song was the flow. Everything felt evenly spaced and said at the same emphasis. And for a song so personal, I don't feel the emotion in it really. I'm sure you had a lot when writing it though. You just need to work on your delivery big time, and the lyrics a little bit.
Just trying to be honest.
its all good
pears? why did he say my pears
its peers, and it means classmates/friends/people our age.
This has clearly been written with real emotion and the listener can feel that. This is a fitting tribute to you late friend.
well when 3 of our friends had died between 2006-2007 we had to make sure that our message got it to our good friends, and we wanted the the emotions to get out to the song viewers, and thats exactly what we did. thanx again for the review.
This is on some reall shit hommie. I feel you on this one. keep it up man.
check out my songs if you have the time.
thanx dude, and ill check out your songs in the meantime.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.