I think its a hot beat
Jus take out that one guy.
He sounds like you found a random fat guy and told him to breathe into the mic while you made this beat.
And his reward was a twinkie ^.^
But your Hi-Hats try putting them in the piano roll. It helps alt bcuz they jus keep goin in goin.
Other then that this beat sounds like it was blessed by Kaliber his self