the instraments you used are really heavy for a song like this. try to lighten it up.
It was okay, but I just didn't feel it
I still like it but..
It would be better if the background melody wasn't so loud. The background seems to dominate the main melody.
i like the "peacful" Feeling of the origanal version though. i like the beat but it could do without all of the other changes. mabey even just tone them down a little
Good work i like it.
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