The background sounds great, but what it needs are louder, deeper drums, those are really light and synthy, ya know what I mean.
Fuck those guys below me this is good.
it's not your genere
not bad for your first hip-hop song
For someone that doesnt get into rap or hip hop, you did a good job. I wouldn't mind hearing the final beat personally. This is something that could actually be used if you do.