It is very good. Please finish
i dont know the original. so i dont know how its suposed to sound. but though i will agree with the dudes below me that u need some pads and some more 'umph' (whatever that means) ^_^''
though i also think that if you played some more keys on the same time it would seem more alive.. depending on the software you use, a few pads or maybe soft drum clip would be going good with it too. maybe a less solid rythm in the piano mellody n then form that rythm with some other instruments or a deeper note on the piano itself.
and then maybe another piano sound or just some tweeking on the one u use now.
i dont know if thats the sound you're looking for but i think it would sound nice..
think it would remind a lil bout the piano track of mine i noticed in ur fave list lol.. (sorry for seming stalk'ish lol)
well botom line. i think this could be great with some work.
I like the piano, but you could add some effects or pads or something cus it seems kinda empty (yes I know its a piano track lol)
It doesn't have quite the same 'umph' that the original track has. I know the idea is to make a different slant on it but it still needs a bit more energy.
Other than that it was fine, and I think with some tweaking it will be great when finished!
Thanks a bunch for the review. I really didn't expect the piece to pass onto the site anyway. I'm Sure I could have made it better if I knew a bit more about how to use the software. Hopefully my next piece will be much better :)