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Sleeping sun piano (demo)

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Author Comments

I made this piece for an RP I'm in where my char does a horrible job at trying to play the piano, hence why it sucks so bad.

However, if for some odd reason PPL want me to finish this, I'll try to if I get enough PMs.
Other then that, please, flame me to your hearts desire. I only request that said flames can be used to help me make a better piece in the future.

THX in advance for voting and comments!


It is very good. Please finish


i dont know the original. so i dont know how its suposed to sound. but though i will agree with the dudes below me that u need some pads and some more 'umph' (whatever that means) ^_^''

though i also think that if you played some more keys on the same time it would seem more alive.. depending on the software you use, a few pads or maybe soft drum clip would be going good with it too. maybe a less solid rythm in the piano mellody n then form that rythm with some other instruments or a deeper note on the piano itself.

and then maybe another piano sound or just some tweeking on the one u use now.

i dont know if thats the sound you're looking for but i think it would sound nice..
think it would remind a lil bout the piano track of mine i noticed in ur fave list lol.. (sorry for seming stalk'ish lol)

well botom line. i think this could be great with some work.


I like the piano, but you could add some effects or pads or something cus it seems kinda empty (yes I know its a piano track lol)

Good, but...

It doesn't have quite the same 'umph' that the original track has. I know the idea is to make a different slant on it but it still needs a bit more energy.

Other than that it was fine, and I think with some tweaking it will be great when finished!


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Atheme responds:

Thanks a bunch for the review. I really didn't expect the piece to pass onto the site anyway. I'm Sure I could have made it better if I knew a bit more about how to use the software. Hopefully my next piece will be much better :)

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Credits & Info


3.88 / 5.00

Mar 20, 2008
2:05 AM EDT
File Info
682.1 KB
44 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.