Not so good
Like others said it sounds like you're reading. The both the rhymes and their meanings are way too simple. Add some internal rhyming and stop pausing after every rhyme. It sounds like you just throw in rhyming words at the end every sentence while repeating that that some Emcees suck. The beat is repetitive and gets annoying. The whole song sounds like a cliche. Try to limit curse words because they are like fillers...a cheap way to rhyme. Fuck stuck buck suck out of luck tuck shit bitch dick clit lick pick sick hit bit tit etc
Big L - See how the rhymes are almost back to back. It just flows, but this song is more like a sprinkler
I push a slick benz, Im known to hit skinz
And get endz and commit sins with sick friends
Cause Im a money getter, also a honey hitter
You think you nice as me? ha ha, youse a funny n***a
when reading others comment read the responds also. listen to our new shit instead of our first songs.
you need to speed up your rappin sound too slow if u doubled it up i bet itd sound twice as good and you need to open with some savage bars otherwise you lose intrest after the first 8 bars.
yea i hear you. it was our 3rd attempt at recording so it wasnt gonna be the all-time best. thanks for your opinion, but can you listen to our newer shit??? aiight man, peace!!!
You have a way to go.
Please quit being so cocky. A noble effort, but ultimately largely unsatisfying. Flow needs improvement, and I didn't believe your delivery. Mean what you spit, you'll get a better response.
the only person i can tell you who is being cocky on NG is theartofkc, and to stay on this topic, i could have sworn i asked you to check out our newer stuff, not my old piece of shit songs like this. and another thing, i wanted respectful constructive critism, not ignorance out of haters, as i told japan4band, and i know thats you anyways cuz your making a japan4 album. dont review my songs twice, cuz thats just obsession right there.
Your flow ISN'T perfect. Your lines sound forced, almost robotic. Loosen up. Y'all aren't as good as you think.
we were loosen up, this is what we liked, and i asked for constructive critism, not ignorance out of haters. well you want to listen to our newer stuff before you can say if our stuff isnt good. this shit is mad old
You need some better beats and you need practice your flow, it shouldn't sound like you are reading and stopping after every line.
lol, who exactly is doin this???
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.