COOL

Hey thats a pretty good job for a seconfd try!

aaahhhh memories!...lol

i like this one...it reminds me of kingdom hearts...10/10

5/5 10/10!

Just telling you now all your songs (even though i didnt hear the first one yet) seem to be loops not songs...if it ends erruptivly its a loop, if it's long and ends erruptivly its a long loop, but if it has an ending instead of repeating in a way, it's a song. I don't vote people based on that though, and this was very nice and I saw what you were going for. Very nice job! Keep it up!

Im kinda getting the feel u want

The melody is great, but the pad/synth your using isnt working out. It sounds too plane. Just go through sytrus and go through the different synths until you find one that sounds better. I will admit tho, for your SECOND song. this is amazing, my second song was not even close to this.

WOOOHOOO!! No quarter note kicks!!!!

Well, not terrible for a second try. So, here's what I have to say for this.
Add more melody. A lot more. Add strings, trumpets, whatever. Just add instruments with more flavor to them. Also, don't use the FL guitar sounds. If you do, use them for specific hits. In this instance, don't use them at all. Also, the hi-hat needs to be toned down on the amount of notes for this. There's too much focus on it. And that background pad you used was a little thin. Try to use one with more bass, or just run it through the Fruity Parametric EQ2 and increase the first three band-widths, give it some more bass. Also, don't try to build up with just the drums, tryo to use more of the melody to build up the song. The drums should be there to just give it a kick in the ass. Although, I did like the fact that you didn't use quarter note kicks. Keep on rolling with that. Help break this stupid quarter note kick thing that most trance/techno artists seem to think is soooo necessary to make a good song. So, hey, keep trying, push yourself, and you'll make some good shit =D