Happy and Sad
First off thank you for PMing me about this song I probably never would have gotten to hear it if you had not PMed me (plus PM me when the final is released)
What made me Happy: To put it flatly the piano echo was great and it should not change for the final (ok maybe make the echo a bit more pronounced but w/e)The guitar really was nice as well (5:20 and on is great)
What made me UNhappy: The guitar at the start made me......cring i guess at the.....I think as gamerkid said "saltyness" of it. I think for the final it should either be A) cleaner with less grain of B) louder....maybe volume will help. I also thought that the song dragged on a little too long in the middle parts. THe song in a whole was a bit long but enjoyable none the less (sersly just shorten the middle section a little) But all in all I thought it was a great demo and possible with my suggestions (or not who knows maybe im insane and youl just make somthing sweet without them) I will fav this song too.