Still hate the intro, but noneoftheless a good song
Better than your first Demo. Your second and third movements are the better portions of the song. I find the echoing piano in the beginning is a bit distracting and the guitar itself is a little overdriven resulting in static with some headphones.
Some of the instruments in the range of 1:45 - 1:55 are too cluttered, I couldn't quite make out what the music was supposed to be in that portion. I'm also getting a sound like "compressed air" at some parts of the song that don't fit that well.
The second movement, Peril I believe, is very well done with the piano and synths...although they do begin getting jumbled around the 4:00 mark.
The final movement is causing distortion due to the high volume/EQ levels prior to the piano. Violin is well done, guitar once again is too overdriven and causing distortion in the song.
Overall an improvement over the previous one, think you only need to really work on the Guitar and EQ levels, the layering of the instruments should even out with panning and EQ levels set for them. Hope this helps.
The guitar kinda sounds like static
its fixed more then the other one but nice job
Eh, still didn't like it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.