this song is sick, as it is. the lyrics are great, and i can hella grove my brain on the beat. my only criticism is the you need some more practice making your voice flow.
agreed, i might make a part two. ive advanced in finding my own flow since this song was recorded last year. glad you liked it though, make sure you stay up to date with my upcoming songs!
Soundz like Immortal Technique, actualy
Your lyrics are good, but something is off... I dunno, I would check it out though if I were you.. it really messes up the song..
Overall good job,
the thing that would be off would be me. i am off beat. my arrangement wasnt the greatest, and the mic quality is a 3 out of 10. Thats what's wrong. This is an olddd song. Thanks for your review.
Your lyrics are alright, however your rhymescheme's seem awkward. Well not awkward, just they sound odd to the beat. However, you have some nice lyrics:
"I don't support the war, but I support the troops"
Anyways, I'd just keep working with different rhyme schemes and such.
thanks man, this is one of my old songs, but i agree with what your saying, thanks for the pos. review.