First off I would like to say that I understand you must be new to the program, and that your music isn't bad for starters, but...stay away from the presets, don't follow in the footsteps of the rest of us, learn how to tweak your oscs and 404s before you get sucked in. They sound cheesy, you need to learn to tweak, and use proper effects on the instruments you use. Also this song is repetitive. Alot of songs are, but it has nothing really to offer so it can really get to you after a while. If you have money, get some VSTS to put into your program, which i assume is FL. If you dont have money...there is always kazaa. Anyway this isn't great, but it's not bad either, so keep working, you'll be kickin ass soon enough.
Thanks, might I say that was good review. You time has been appreciated.