everything they said and
10 for creativity, i don't know , i haven't heard anything this creative in a while on NG,, i really think you have something great. Although this track is not great as far as quality of sound, i can't stop listening. I HOPE you will remake ur trance tracks,
p.s. i like trance so that is why i am only review ur trance tracks.
It's not one of my faves (The Masterpiece) but it is really good, the only things i didnt particuraly dig was the kick and clap, something about em jus didnt feel right untill the leads kicked in, and yeah there was a lot of distortion on my comps speakers, still not as much as my bass overload on futuristic darkness though lol, but anyway yeah great job man, as all ways it's top notch stuff.
I like this a lot!
You have all the sounds you need. I can only name a few things that should change.
Your leads are a bit too loud. Your clap is too loud, and could probably use more reverb. Also, the song could use more action n the sub-sonic end of it. And your open hat shouldn't have a tail (ask me if you don't know how to get rid of the tail :P), it really gives the song a more muddy'ish feel. Also, when using a double-pedal effect, be sure to lower the velocity on the kicks that aren't on the beat, otherwise your mix with become overwhelmed with sound, and mixing will be thrown off. And, the song seems to clip in a lot of areas, make sure you don't go too haywire, and make sure your mix stays below 0 decibels at all times.
This song definitely has the potential to be a great track, man! Just add some bass and a tad more EQing. Keep producin' man! :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.