Here are the lyrics:

[Intro]

This song is brought to you as a request from a gentleman too shy to reveal his name

[Audience, murmurs and ponders at the same time]

And remember, no holds barred, no regrets
And the dance floor is ALL YOURS

[Verse 1]

Love
I gave you my love
I gave you my all
I gave you my trust
Love of my

Life
I gave you my life
you ran with my heart
my one true desire
broken my

[Chorus]
Trust me when I say this
I have no eyes for no one else
You're my muse my devil
You're my one and true no other
If He wants to end us
I will bring down Hell and fire
Join me take my hand dear
I will show you all our splendor

[Intermission]
Wait wait, he sings now?
I guess everyone can do it nowadays

[Audience members, in disbelief of The Announcer's words, talk on the background]

No, no, because there's actually talented people out there that know how to sing,
and then you have discount Doctor Sung over here singing some bullshit about love
An-And what is it with songs and love anyway? Get new material you hacks.

[Audience gasps at The Announcer]

What? I'm right!

[Verse 2]
Mind
you've broken my mind
you've stolen my pride
I've said my goodbyes
[Announcer] "Yeah, that's not true"
[Audience member] "Shut the fuck up"
[Announcer]"I'm right!"

Lies
you lied and you ran
you ran to his arms
you're gone for his love
What a sorry sight...

[Chorus]
Trust me when I say this
I have no eyes for no one else
You're my muse my devil
You're my one and true no other
If He wants to end us
I will bring down hell and fire
Join me take my hand dear
I will show you all our splendor

[Intermission 2]

[Announcer] Wow, thank you ladies and gentlemen, let's give a round of applause to our mysterious singer, who I still can't believe can sing.
[Audience] How's he still talking about that?
[Announcer]Bite me! And thank you for having the courage to come here and speak your mind on this woman of yours, but, you really have to get goi-
Wait, what are you doing?

[Verse 3]
Do you expect me to just
forget the love that I
had for you all of the
years and all the struggles
[Announcer]
When I think of your death Wait, Death? (mumbling)
I can't help but feel like
Fate has played a fool of Hey hey wait wait a minute
us both and our time Dude dude hold on

[Song stops]

[Announcer]S-So all this time, you were talking about your dead wife?

[Twerp] Uh, yeah man

[A]Then why do the lyrics make it sound like she cheated on you?

[T] I don't get it

[A]O-oh,O-Ok, look
"you ran with my heart
my one true desire
broken my trust"?

[T] Yah I mean, she died you know, I trusted her to keep herself alive

[A] and [Audience] WHAT?!
[Audience is confused]

[A]Oh my Lord, ok, so what about this one:
"Lies
you lied and you ran
you ran to his arms
you're gone for his love"
What's up with that?

[T] Yah, I mean she promised me we would be together forever
but then she died and ran to the arms of Death...

[Audience is in disbelief]

[A]Oh, this is way too much folks, HAHAHAHAHAHA. Get off the stage you twerp. Come on, move along.

[Twerp gets boo'ed off the stage by the audience]

[A]Anyway, thank you for tuning in, have a wonderful night, and I'll see you... in the next show.

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Commentary:

This is a song that I made around mid 2023. My initial thought process for this song was a homage of sorts to bands like TWRP (hence the name). I wanted to make a song that had some disco and synth elements on it, but that also told some sort of playful and fun vibe, like a NSP song. Did I accomplish that? In my opinion, I'm not exactly sure. I think it was a pretty good first attempt.

The stuff I really like:

The instrumentals. I think I cooked pretty hard with the melodies and the chorus.

The stuff I don't like:

The lyrics. Not the actual lyrics, but rather, the way the lyrics sound. I can't sing to save my life, so I decided to use a vocoder. I think it sounds good in some parts, but in others, it's very hard to make out what I'm saying.

The mixing. I think the mixing is kinda really really bad. I was debating whether or not to upload this because of that factor, but I decided anything you make in your creative career is worth sharing for one reason or another.

That's my commentary on this. I hope you enjoy it~