i think its super tight and fresh
original and tight!
love the hook!
Beat is good! Lyrics.. mhh.. it has something.. needs refining..
same problems, same qualities
again i say what phaded said this time
and those other times
again the lyrics are the shit
ur flow is great
and the beat happens to be pretty good
work on that issue of delivery and ull own the charts man
keep it up man
youv got serious skills
"on a lyrical level i'm Jay-Z"
ur gettin' there man
thank you sir
I thought the same thing, or something like Bone Thugz.
Great lyrics. Just need some delivery.
The equalizing is great.
If you know how, add a little treble to your voice.
It makes your words more emphasized and clear.
I can show you how to master your voice, if you dont know how.
Keep working on those lyrics!
Eventually youll be legendary, it just takes time.
I struggle all the time with my lines, so you aint alone homie.
im always open to advice! how do i add treble? PM me and let me know about the treble. get back at me! Thanks for the feedback
you tricked me
i thought this was gonna be a hip hop remix of prince's when doves cry
lol naahh its actually inspired by bone thugz n' harmony's song, when thugs cry.