dope

i think its super tight and fresh
original and tight!
love the hook!

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Beat is good! Lyrics.. mhh.. it has something.. needs refining..

same problems, same qualities

again i say what phaded said this time
and those other times

again the lyrics are the shit
ur flow is great
and the beat happens to be pretty good

work on that issue of delivery and ull own the charts man

keep it up man
youv got serious skills

"on a lyrical level i'm Jay-Z"
ur gettin' there man

Shek

Great

I thought the same thing, or something like Bone Thugz.
Great lyrics. Just need some delivery.
The equalizing is great.
If you know how, add a little treble to your voice.
It makes your words more emphasized and clear.
I can show you how to master your voice, if you dont know how.
Keep working on those lyrics!
Eventually youll be legendary, it just takes time.
I struggle all the time with my lines, so you aint alone homie.

you tricked me

i thought this was gonna be a hip hop remix of prince's when doves cry