I liked it................
it reminded me of the challenges of everyday life and with it to unlock that special part of my brain that the door has been hidden and sealed long ago. Once the door has been opened I cannot be responsible for what comes next but I try to fight it off as much as I can. The guards watch as I use the key and slowly open the door to find the madness that flows through the slight crack on the opening. I decide to close it to open it another day from which once fully opened I can never go back to the way it used to be.
I would not change a thing on the song. It took me to s special spiritual plane in my mind and even though I do no drugs this gave me a high to remember for years to come.
A song that gets stuck in your head easily
The repeating is good, but maybe slightly overdone. I like how you took the a single beat and made so many different versions of it to make the entire piece. Maybe adding in a different rhythm would help? In the end, I love it.
A bit repetitive (so is techno music) But well done, well structured and beautiful chords. I'm less fan about the drums but I'm sure you can make better.
Keep on going.