i love how you did the piano, very soulfull nicely done
i disagree with gypsydavey
I think the endless piano riff gives the song its soul.. without it it wouldnt be the same... maybe some more variations different than ups and downs.. thats what makes the ear tired... have you ever heard beethovens claire de lune? even if the song continues a same pattern, sometimes it varies it in order for the ear not to lose interest... maybe you should look it up! great work overall I gave you a 5 and I'll give you a 9 here!
Yes I will look up that song and see what your talking about. Maybe I should have taken a break from the piano riff in the middle, then brought it back. But thats why I put songs on here, so I can know what to change with them
This was music to drift away on - great for a certain type of flash. However, I found that endless 'piano' riff became irritating after a while. Perhaps you should fade it in the middle and reintroduce it at the end. I loved the way the layers built up at the start. Good stuff.
Your right I kind of had that feeling like it was repeating to much. I was going to get rid of it during the middle then bring it back. All the songs on here are put on here so I can fix the problems, so I will def. work on it! THanks