Well I'm not going to say it's bad but like jnry3 said it just really doesn't sound full becuase of the eq and maybe throw a couple more filters in to switch things up.
I do like the little piano thing you got going though.
it was just something i throw together, i wasnt expecting perfect scores, i just know it doesnt deserve 1s, its not a crap song
Pros: Nice concept.
Cons: Needs tons of work to make it more engaging to listen to. To start with, the entire mix sounds thin. I know it's still very basic, but it needs to be tuned to garner proper scores.
I feel you about the low scores (got here via the Audio Ads thread in the BBS), but listen to those who spent tons of time over their work, and you will hear the difference. I know you've spent time on this work, but you need to spend more time and tweak it more if you want a higher score.
Peace man. ^_^
i did throw it together, but i thought it sounded pretty good, and it definitly didnt deserve anything lower then a 1
im not saying its top quality, although i think its pretty catchy, but it got hammered pretty hard at first