Intro & Melody
The intro just doesn't fit this beat....maybe add a syth...the bass was on point tho
Lacks a certain... impact?
The groove itself sounds alright, but the samples sound a bit too clean at parts and sort of lacks impact. I'm not a big fan of the orchestra hits in the intro, but the groove that starts around 1:00 sounds pretty tight (watch the distortion though). Try filtering and adding some other effects to the loop and see if can't get more... let's say "character" from the drum loop.