Hey look It has A good beat And all just some things don't go together and Just sound bad for example The bell thing...Needs to be fixed or just removed...I think it could really work out and Its really made me think Because a friend of mine asked me to make a Techno like beat and I didn't know where to start...so thanks for that but work on this some and maybe split the melodies up instead of having them all play at the same time have them played at separate times it sounds pretty good to me up till about 0:26
If you have aim or msn let me know Maybe we could work together
Have A Great Day
thanks for the usually smart honesty you have. Yes that would be fun to work on this together - i have msn messanger. PM me your contact info.... I'm using fl studio 7, producer edition on this.
I like this! It's like a hybrid of techno and hiphop. Awesome! You have to finish this :)
and very much thanks... should i bring up the pace or should i keep it slow with a techno spice?
So far sounds great, smooth and simple, with lots of progressive additions. Tis a bit short though, but I'm sure you'll fix that soon? Keep it going!
I also think the bassline is kinda loud. I noticed you like making trance and techno tracks and the techno and trance elements are found here too. So yeah, the only suggestion I got is to lower the bass and make it a bit more hip hop sounding, just a tad bit. But this is still good so I'm gonna give it a 5. Keep practicing!
THANKS! I really appreciate the positive response I'm getting from you guys. I'm soaking this all in... so keep the reviews coming, i got lots to learn!
Returning the favor...
Quite an interesting track you got here. One thing I would consider doing is lowering the bass, because it's really overpowering, and overlaps the drumline and synths. Other than that, this is pretty good for a first try at hip-hop. You got the key things layed down. A nice melody, and drums that complements it without going over the top, and a catchy bassline, though a bit loud. Good stuff. Voted 5.
thanks for the 5, even if it deserves a 4 or so. Ya, i think the bass might be a bit much, i was actually experimenting for a techno song to be able to bump up my bass without static and i put the deep bass to a different beat and it just was very catchy....thanks for the compliment, if it gets somewhat good response from people i'll finish it and fix that powerful bass.