interesting as always!
i like you, you have a very unique and identifyable style in yourself, the way you type and stuff.
your music has the potential, you have the basic song DOWN. all the elements really needed to just MAKE a song is here, but i feel... i know the FL preset sounds too well, so i can just identify them instantly, i think you just need to take your extremely unique self, and put it into your song some more, make your sounds as unique as you are and express it though your music. add a bit more effects to the instruments, a bit of mixing which i see you did already!
i belive the only reason this gets rated low, is that this just seems like some foolery in FL. i can tell this song might have taken you some time. effort and emotion are very very different in music =O if a song takes only a hour or less to make but you put your soul into it, its gunna be NASTY. you could spend forever on a song, but make it jst to have something, it might not do as well surprisingly.
but ill stop my EXTrEMELY long review of this. i can see you as the next big thing, definetly work a bit more with crazy effects, they may sound good!
peace bro. good song ^_^
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