Add more

So this was very nice my thing is there is something really good here but is just too short and needs much more added to it more sounds more mixture and some even some build up into an intense element but that's just an idea to think about so nice job here and I hope you can make more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad much more to this much more mixture

~X~

Works

Sounds like the beginning of a great song.

Woo!

It's a pretty good hiphop tune, good stable background beat and a nice melody ontop of that. It almost loops too, heh. Gets a bit monotonous after a while, but other than that it's great. I suggest either adding a few additional sound effects/hits at certain places or playing a few high/lower notes for about half the track. Keep it going!

-cd-