You needed more parts with drums and make it less repetitive. Especially you need to add some bass or pads at least in the back. The drum parts were the only things that lived it up. Maybe you could have added bass with the drums. The electric parts should stay the same though
Your on to something but...
This song is unbelievable repetitive. The first the 1:40 was the same exact thing over and over. switch it up a bit by adding in a counter melody. I heard some arps, but that didnt really cut it. The main synths you chose were good in the beginning. The drums at 1:50 were pretty good.
Probably the downfall of this song was how much it repeats it self, other then that, you have a pretty solid song and you should definatly keep it up! =D
would have voted a 2.5 but cant so w/e heres a 3
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