its only my opinion of course, but the title of the track doesnt suit the sound of the piece. which isnt neccesarily a bad thing. it kinda sounds like a cross between something out of perfect dark, and the title screen to metal gear solid 2. its not harsh on the ears, and does kinda have a feel like something nefarious is in the works. could also be used for menu music.
either way i look at it, i like it, and would really like to hear what else you plan to do to the piece.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.