A little strange sounding, but thats because of the backwards sounds etc...other than that the arrangement actually seems to become what its trying to be, with little exception: around the 3.50 minutes mark it does feel like it needs to build and evolve a bit...you build it up with, first the piano sound effects, and then the drums, and when the drums reach their peak, its like you needed to add something there.
Good arrangement, if you have time, please listen to my version of this song. I would be interested to hear your thoughts :)
I think this song has potential. Yet it is mighty slow. Speed it up a little faster, pull the drums in tighter... And louden the piano. You really drowned it out in areas. Yet it is good. You just need to work on it a little more. And about half way you could tell some of the sounds wanted to break they where too high for their places. Maybe look into that as well.
Otherwise. Good piece.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.