Your title is contradictory.
While I understand that you were going for a serious tone for this track, I can't help but notice that your title seems a bit cheezy. For all the effort you put into this, I don't know why you would want to ruin it with a title that conveys exactly the opposite feeling to what you wanted to achieve. Something to think about. As for the song, I never give tens, so an 8 is high for me.