The vocal samples are cool. I enjoyed the laughs.
Throughout this tune though, the melodic loop was really drilling into my brain - though you changed up the beats and added some background stuff at points, it just felt like there was never enough variation or stuff going on to elevate it above a dull experience.
Often, when you switched the beat it was only to return to an earlier one. You had an alternative melody and what sounded like a few instrument (or effect) changes. Really though, it just seemed to drone on and on and by the end I was just glad it was over.
You've got some decent loops and sounds, but need to work on variety and progression.
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I liked the abrupt start, I really did. But like Coop said, it did get really repetitive. I can't really say too much bad about this tune other than that. Repetiveness can yield 1 of 2 results; it can help, or it can hurt. In this song's case I think it was the latter. Good techno song all in all, but I think it just needs a little bit of work and touching up and it'll be pretty solid.
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My brain is melting.
This loop is just too repetitive for my liking. The whole effect that has been conveyed to me is about 10 seconds looped pretty constantly for 3 minutes, which doesn't endear me to the tune much at all. You've given us a few modulations, which helps, but it doesn't give me the impression that you've poured yourself into this with any great conviction.
At least the track loops well, but it's a small mercy, as now the repetitiveness carries on ad infinitum. Why not give us other parts of the tune instead?
[Review Request Club]
Sorry about melting your brain...
thanks for the review though
This had me tapping along to it, great song. The beat was solid, and the laughter was just insane. Just added to the strange but cool feeling of the song. Really good drum work, seemed to be the main point of the song. And was done well, great job
=Review Request Club=
Thanks. I did try to focus on the drum work, but I guess it's not all that noticeable unless you have some decent headphones or speakers with some bass.
Anyway, thanks for the review. Glad you enjoyed it.
First off i like the way it sorta hits right into it from the very start, its got quite a funky beat which i like. The laugh near the start was a bit unnerving but very cool.
The main beat starts to get a bit samey and needs a tad variation, as the voical parts bring the track up the repetativeness brings it down. So work on that.
Overall though its pretty good, just work on variation and also nice loop ^_^
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I have other versions where I do variations with the main beat but it kind of detracts from the general feel of what I originally wanted. It got to the point to where it sounded like I had dual personalities or something.
I hate build-ups so that's why I just went head first into this one and I know the laughing is unnerving... makes it fun :)
Thanks for the review