Ok so here i am
Ok so here i am an i think its ok. You have a nice rythm going on.
In the begging its a little awkard.
When it gets to 1:05 its pretty nice an forward
Alot of frequencys there...
An the title of this submission doesnt go with it.
I would of gave you a 5/5 10/10 if you would of added alot more bass.
I think you massively need to add more bass.
An add some sort of filter here. Low pass or Band pass not sure....
Take Care. Hope to here something interesting from you next time.