The harmonies between the guitars were great, and contrary to FKWAJP, the guitar was fine. The violins at the beginning were pretty great, even if they did sound looped.
Use a different guitar.
The guitar was way to edgy man, you need to replace i with a synth.
The intro seemed a little tedious, but it was okay. After it all started picking up, it was a nice little number. Had a great "classic rock" feel to it. Seemed like you put a lot of time into the guitar line for this, and it showed. Overall, awesome track =] 5/5
thank you man