i mean the intro kinda didnt fit at 1st man, but your going to need more then some Strings to make this hip-hop. i mean it sounds kinda good. i mean i dont think people can realy spit to this, lol just keep trying and check out some of my stuff, Killbills stuff, Greeksta, InG i mean there all good lol just lissen to lost and lot of hip hop man. >.< thats all i can say.
Needs ALOT of work..
Every sound is at the same "level" of sound so it all sounds messy.. the only real good in it was the start "1-15sek"
i like it, its got a good bass line and who ever the girl is she's lucky not many girls can claim thers a song written about then lol
lol thx =)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.