your song lacks too much melodic varity for me. the beeping thing and the pad in the background is all you have. i wouldve prbly used some kind of swishy space fx for added effect, too.
for the drums, 3/5. i love beat chopping myself and you did a satisfactory job of it in this tune. i wouldve used a different kit tho. imo, most acoustic kits are hard to slice n dice and sound good.
why 8? cuz i like the eerie/abstract/mars-ish mood you established with your pads and blippity blops....i didnt like the drums as much. keep it up. 4'd.
You were sitting in traffic? and you wrote a song? or you got ideas?