chill

this trance is nice

Cool

But needs improvement, cause it's not exciting. Make a full song.

Sorry, but I have some complaints bout this..

To start, it does not sound like the beginning of this actually starts with the first note, but the -second- note of the song. O_o (hope I'm wrong about that.)

Second on the list is the actual song. You didn't bother to play the rest of the parts to the song, only the first section. That really takes away from the feeling of the song. Or at least for me it does since it's one of my all time favorite songs.

Finally the overall beat and/or melody of the song make my ears bleed a little (not literally thankfully). It's too "blah". Spice it up a little or more. Even if it is just a loop, its far too bland. Give it some life? ^^

Good luck on "spicier" submissions in the future. :]

~DBD~

its cool but,

you have to have a good name to go with it like popcorn in a trance

Pretty nice!

Yeah.