he didnt make the beat
~SO DONT GIVE HIM CREDIT FOR IT.~ Lyrics r pretty nice tho :)
this is pretty good
i like this a lot man, makes me think alot ^_^ keep it up
I really like the production track on this - it has a bit of that dirty old-school feel, but with more modern sensibilities too. The lyrics got pretty solid flow too, though the voice felt a bit too seperated in the mix from the beats. The only thing I'm so sure about is the intro part - the clicking thing doesn't really seem to lead that well into anythin really. But nice job on this - it's fairlyhard to find decent hip-hop tracks here, so stuff like this is much welcomed. Nice.
holy shit finally
lyrics were actually fucken good for a first on NG from my experience. sick shit man. But it would have been label / radio good if you had someone else do the rapping. hehe, not to be really mean about it, but come on be honest to yourself. You sung it well for the most part but i saw some parts that could have been sung better mostly in tone. And man filtering your vocals would have done wonders because your S's sound lisped a bit.
Overall sick track, straight up.
someone else is gunna sing but aint no one gunna rap my shit, this was done on a comp so no excuses but I can blame the ss's on that.
I don't like hip-hop.
But I liked this.
Get someone else to sing the chorus, just like lucid08 said, but besides that, excelent song and excelent lyrics.
it's a KRS-1 beat, which is real hip-hop, but thanks for the positive feedback, means a lot since your not a fan of the genre, means i'm doing something right lol rofl tofl dofl
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.