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Author Comments

This one's short because I didn't feel like making it longer. This song was inspired by the work of a guy called "nubbinownz", go ahead and check out his work. It may be quite shitty compared to his songs, but this was fun making. Estimated time to of work was 3 or 4 hours, in a span of two days. Drums may be lacking variation, but eh. The "swirly" sound you hear is an experiment :D

Not entirely classical by the way. All votes and crit appreciated.

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Wonderful floaty vibe. Just short.

This song has a great, uplifting vibe.

The opening melody works well. The drums may be repetitive but they end up sufficiently in the bg that I don't mind. The keyboard work is great - I love the floaty vibe - never getting predictable and moving all over the scale. The stringy choir-esque sound that kicks in at 45s is great.

My only beef with it is its length. If it stopped at 1:22, I'd enjoy listening to it over and over more than I do now. If it were longer, I'd stick it on and drift away.

Ironically, the length is also something that makes me think I might draw a story...

A guy stares up at the sky. Sky above, camera rotates around him. He jumps and flies into the air. Gathering clouds particles in his hands, he cuts out sections. He rises higher, waving at aeroplane passengers, looping around, twisting, gathering more clouds... to form a message - a declaration of love?

At the end of the song, traffic would fade in and it'd reveal the guy to be in the middle of a pavement. A wistful look, a sigh and he walks away.

My to-do list just became longer.

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Good

Great song, a really nice intro, the piano work is amazing. Smooths out into a nice beat/rhythm section, complimented very well by the lead sample parts. Really worked quite well, my only complaint would be the fact the song just seemed to stop short, other than that it's perfect,great job

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Pretty Good

The opening is very nice, seems to build up pretty slowly which is good, the main part of the tune seems to be very nice to, very calm to listen to and quite a lot happens within the main part of the song. The ending is pretty good to, though it ends past where it has been pretty busy with the main song, so that might seem a little odd.

Everything in this song seems to come together pretty well which is good to hear, I can't spot anything that really sticks out as not fitting in with this, though it is a shame it isn't a little longer, I think it could have ended a little slower, much like it started.

4/5

<3

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Nice work

So you've given us maybe 7 or 8 different notes on the piano in this repeating loop? I don't really care that it's that simple, because it sounds so damn effective. The melody that you've played over the top just makes it sound so complete and the extra sounds you've added really do the whole thing some kind of justice.

What I'd suggest is that you stretch it out a little more, as it's a little on the short side at 1 1/2 minutes long. If you could reach 3 minutes, you'd be able to fit so much more variation in, taking the listener for a journey around their own mind. Most of the track is already there, so the variation is only the real work that you'd need to put in ;)

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Fan of piano

liked the swirly sound very much, maybe a bit overused, I don't have complaints about the drums variating, I only think the snare could be a better sample. The piano part was a bit repititive as said before but I like this very much. Faving.
Great Job.

Jurian


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Credits & Info

GronmonSE
Author

Listens
1,529
Downloads
93
Votes
25
Score
4.05 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 4, 2008
5:17 PM EST
Genre
Classical
File Info
Song
3.3 MB
1 min 26 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.