thats sounds more like i don't know. what kind of metal you're listening to? i guess i would put it under really weird art metal? some more organization would be nice. maybe a better riff. or less distortion so we can hear it. and you might want to get rid of you're drummer.
this isnt very good but......
the guitar sounds much like guitar pro guitar but the drums would sound allright if the beats were cool i suggest listening to more metal if this is a direction you want to take i don think people will like it