It sounds unfinisheds. You need to mix it up. It gets a little bit repetitve.
Smooth, very cool
I love the composition itself. It's very cool, as stated above-- it definitely seems to draw from klezmer, generic Western anthems, and more mellow club beats of the latter day. In short, it's diverse, and with diverse sound and influence comes unique and impressive music.
Here's the personal aspect: I have one gripe, and that's the bare-bones violin(s). Were you to mess around with some EQ, or even just distort it a tad, it'd feel a bit more natural, in it's current state, it feels plastic-y, like Frank Zappa's album "Jazz From Hell"; the composition's great, but the end sound could stand some work. Maybe you could try backing the violin with another stringed instrument of a lower range, too, to get a slightly richer sound.
It could use a modicum of alteration, but all in all, it's a solid, swaggering piece. Good shit, sir. Good shit.
thanx man...i really appreciate it..
it was good, but some improvement is needed.....try and mix it up you know change some rhythmes up once in a while
did you rate that shit down like that?