this is a great style.....i only think that the hihats are a little too load, but thats ok^^
maybe you'll master it a little more
Like, I understand that it is supposed to sound weird because there is supposed to be an error, but...
I thought it could have sound a bit better.
The ending part, I agree with the guy below me, was probably the best part, and it IS really good, I'm not trying to sell you short or anything.
Maybe you should try another way to build up to the final sound. It's not bad, it just needs a bit of work.
other than that...
I have a feeling your cd is going to be pretty darn good.
could use work
all it sounds like is someone tapping on something. the only part i thought was good was the end