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I'm sorry for not reviewing it sooner, but now that the full version is out, I'll review this one instead ;)

Starts out with a sine-ish pad that really gives a good promise- most songs with this intro turn out incredibly catchy and fucking awesome in the end. It doesn't really kick off when it's supposed to though, the intensity change at 0:27 is barely noticeable, at 0:40 it's not much either. Might want to make the kick MUCH more louder and offensive- have the transient louder (or make one, doesn't seem like there IS much of a transient :o) and generally take it higher in the mix. It sounds a lot like a tom in the background now D:

Synths generally sound pretty good, but I have a feeling a few of em are very weak- like that supersaw ditty- I'd love to hear it much louder too. The entire mix is getting muddy from the busiest part and to the end ('bout 2:30 and out), not really anything you can do much about and I'm not sure how it couldaf been done better. But it's not perfectly perfect, or something. ^_^

Song structure is a bit weird- it almost linearly evolves in intensity. Some repetition could do good (not in the parts themselves- actually, I felt the parts themselves were a bit too long. But having some kind of chorus and verse to build around, that would certainly make it more catchy- but you decide, I assume you're not gonna make a drastic change like that:) Melodies are all original and great sounding.

Good stuff. But a bit anonymous- it doesn't really stand out much. Pretty damn good song though, great work! And sorry for not reviewing sooner.

I love that out of tune trance pad.

Afetr the first pad, you followed up with some really nice trance synths and a nice shaking beat in the background.
the only thing I recommend is adding a very long deep pad near 1:22 when that buuuuuuuuuriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii sound comes on. You still had some great build up in there, which is exactly what I hoped for. I loved the song all together though, so keep it up!

5'D 10'D

a pretty complex song.

Coomplex but at the same time its nicely simple. So it does flow rather well and gives the ear alot to work with. I don't think i've gotten to review one of your songs yet so if not this would be the first one and its a good song to start with. Great work all together and its pretty nicely done. Keep on it.

Wyldfyre1

Shwig

i don't think there is anything to suggest. The song builds up slowly and ends off nicly. Great work, hope to see more.

whoa

nice buildup! a really unique song, love it. keep it this way! 5/5