You captured that essense I think. Nice simplisicty and melodic interplay on your instrumentation. I think it's fine without ever developing a hardcore beat since very few Ambient tracks are meant to hit hard anywhere along the way. Love the synth dropo-in at 2:00, but ya shoulda kept another background instrument before the piano came in, like the tinkling bells synth. This coulda been a powerful wave of synthesizers coming at the listener from all directions, with that saw in the mid channel, piano from the right, and a nice wavering bell phasing from left to right with a support synth on the left channel. As powerful a sound as the saw is it begs for some crazy phasing effect work to make this pulsate. But all-in-all a superbly put together ambient piece.
Keep it up.
I might have to do a re-up on this one for a future album. Great input.
Was great. I was expecting some nice hard beats near the middle of the song and...
I never got it XD.
It was real good, real solemn and nice to listen to.
Keep up the good work!
thank you :) I personally think this is one of my best songs so I'm glad you like it.