I loved it keep up the good work!!!
Hey whats up well for all the reviews you did on My song I feel I can write you a long one lol.
Ok lets start with the needs work part.
1: Ok the intro Maybe add a piano in it don't just stick with the strings add some awesome piano melody in their gets just to get things started.
2: : Your melody is pretty well the same after the intro and I think it needs more variation.
3: and Your drums Work on finding some better drum samples...Trust me it makes a HUGE difference.
4: I say this to alot of people add more to the song there could be so much more even it it runs on the same melody if it sounds good then add it.
OK ok now its for the good.
1: I think you did a Awesome job on the In Intro strings.
2: The structure of the song is well played it part intro,middle,end all you need now is a bridge. ( or break what ever you want to call it)
3: At 1:29 I think the new melody that comes in sounds pretty awesome to me lol
thats always the hardest part I think is getting the melody right.
4: And last I thin you drum are well played out in the song I just thing the samples aren't to noticeable...you know what I mean there not like OH I wish those kick samples lol but yeah.
Good use of you have And a good effort And I enjoy watching You grow music wise lol.
Have A great Day!
Eyyyyy. (does Fonz thumbs up thingie)