That was pretty interesting. It lacks song structure and melodys, but its a pretty neat mix of sounds i guess. I suggest u add a beat, www.vengeance-sound.de is a good site for getting techno/trance samples (if ur willing to pay some money). They also have vanguard presets.
I suggest u listen to some of my songs to get an idea of what ur music could sound like. And if u ever need any other help or anything just PM me