The sounds you used sound really good, as did the sequencing. The random drum breaks got kind of annoying. I wasn't sure if it was a messup or if you wanted it to sound that way. I think it broke off and you wrote somthing of your own near the middle. I can't remember how the original went all the way. Pretty good though.
You know, you're completely right about those damned drum fills being annoying. I dunno why I left it like that. I'll go ahead and edit that and re-upload the track. >.>