I really like the chord structure and melody...however, I do think that it would sound better sung in a different way...now, I agree, an emo whining voice wouldn't work too well (well it would, but it would be generic)...so I'm thinking retro...old school...like Beatles...sounds like a Lennon song...well, that's my opinion...but hey, I really like the song! I think it has great potential...you just have to put some effort into the vocals :) I vote 5
Thanks. This is a song I dug up on my iTunes, and it was recorded years ago. I think I'm gonna try out a slightly more bravado vocal line. Thanks for the feedback.
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I'm so glad you didn't use the generic emo voice in this.
Another great song. You show a lot of emotion through your singing.
I'll be waiting for more.
You flatter me, lol.
What program d'you make this on? You can really hear the hiss...or is it supposed to be like that?
I gave it 5/5 anyway.
I made this with windows sound recorder and a 15 dollar microphone. Mystery solved, right? Lol.