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The snare (or clap actually) at 0:54 fits the track much better. Practice your voice.. you got skill.. but WORK ON IT! :)
A lil suttin suttin i whipped up at tha cuzzo's crib, producing is my number one goal this i'm just having fun with lol - holla @ me o and the hook is a failed T-Pain attempt lmao.
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The snare (or clap actually) at 0:54 fits the track much better. Practice your voice.. you got skill.. but WORK ON IT! :)
Maintain
....vocal clarity is shaky throughout the song...your flow sounds off at times but overall not a bad song..keep working at it
In the mood kinda thing plus i hardly rap anymore, but we found some old mic n went beserk with it. Thanks for takin' the time to listen/review.
Haha I like the T-Pain attempt!
Everytime I hear this song, it becomes one of my favs!!!! Nice job hommie!!!
That's wassup, 'preciate it.
I feel it.
Alright. I can kinda feel it. The track is I can't really tell if it's a sample or what. I can't so I'm not to sure how to review it. But nonetheless it's a nice track. The lyrics is getting there. But the punchlines was a little Ion know. To...in the same pattern.
You gotta mix it up in the pattern. But I like it though. Keep it up.
Thanks fo the review, yea it was a quicky just wrote something up on a topic i love (girls) real fast and laid it down, what about the punchlines now??. The beat is sampled though, dude kajmir made it.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.