The snare (or clap actually) at 0:54 fits the track much better. Practice your voice.. you got skill.. but WORK ON IT! :)
....vocal clarity is shaky throughout the song...your flow sounds off at times but overall not a bad song..keep working at it
In the mood kinda thing plus i hardly rap anymore, but we found some old mic n went beserk with it. Thanks for takin' the time to listen/review.
Haha I like the T-Pain attempt!
Everytime I hear this song, it becomes one of my favs!!!! Nice job hommie!!!
That's wassup, 'preciate it.
I feel it.
Alright. I can kinda feel it. The track is I can't really tell if it's a sample or what. I can't so I'm not to sure how to review it. But nonetheless it's a nice track. The lyrics is getting there. But the punchlines was a little Ion know. To...in the same pattern.
You gotta mix it up in the pattern. But I like it though. Keep it up.
Thanks fo the review, yea it was a quicky just wrote something up on a topic i love (girls) real fast and laid it down, what about the punchlines now??. The beat is sampled though, dude kajmir made it.