why is it my Fault?
This is not trance
It's more like breakbeat eurodance. With some trance elements. It's too pompous and in your face. It does end up turning into really cheesy epic trance later on but... I'd just rather not listen too it...
Epic trance should have died with anthem trance ages ago. Personally I think you should leave the cheeseball melodies and bombastic anthems for house and eurodance.