Needs a little polish to make it shine!!
I agree with Crazy Cookie on the beginning. Either take it out because it just doesnt seem like it belongs or add another instrument with a melody.
I was full ready to download and save to rip into a CD, but I'm afraid the distortion effect you added is just not pleasant to the ears even though it would match the name you have given it as it being overloaded. but i think hi-hats or shortened cymbals would be better than the distortion effect.
Btw i love the beat you added at 1:50 ish.
But besides those 2 points i loved everything else.
Awaiting your changes for download =)
:D think ill just write up a new track with the same feel as the second half of this one. really do not know why i put that crap intro in there. :S thanks for commenting!
You should really make the beginning less repetitive. The first minute is kind of annoying and a little hard to bear with. You should probably try and shorten that. Or get rid of it.
I like the rest of the song though, especially at 1:30. That sounded VERY nice. There is this static noise from about 1:50 and on that you should try and fix.
keep it up!
lol. its called distortion. i kinda liked it, added some more oomph to my drums.
as for the beginning? yeah, not much of a classical writer lol. =P thanks tonnes for teh review!